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Nathaniel  

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scene 1:soul and body disagree

Knock, knock(sound)   
“Whose there?”(question)     
“Your soul.”(statement)   
“Well what the hell are you doing out there?”(question)   
“Tring to hide from your bad judgment.”(statement/insult)   
“Well then why the fuck are you knocking on the door then?”(question/anger)   
“I left my wallet.”(statement/plea)   
“Well, mister I’m too good for my body, you should have thought of that before you left.”(statement/anger/insult)   
“I would have, but I was in a hurry.  Your ex is coming over and I know your going to do something stupid, and I wanted

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Las Vegas love songShe sits still on the edge of the bed.   
I want her to love me forever.  And I feel like I am less then clever.  She is beauty and I am the beast.  There is comfort in being weak.  I want her to want me.  She wants me to stay home.  So we both crawl back into bed.  The rush of blood and taste of sweat.  I watch her mown and bite her lip.  We both surge together and go limp.  Pleasure isn’t always an endeavor,  And it never lasts forever,  But life isn’t meant for us to hold on to.  Life is meant to live.   
She sits still on the edge of the bed. Las Vegas love song
in Open on 12/20/06
king of the deadShe walked into the bedroom.  This was going to get ugly.   
 I had recently started working the night shift, and our relationship was suffering.  I slept when she was awake.  She slept when I was awake.  We had become strangers.  I couldn’t tell you three things about her day.  Not three.  I missed my wife, but I couldn’t stop working.   
“Are you going to work tonight?” yeah this was bad.  “You know the answer to that.”  “You could just call in.”  “No I can’t.  You know that too.  Do you like having a roof and fo king of the dead
in Mystery on 12/18/06
a picture of a beautiful girlShe is a tortured soul.  No one sees her struggle.  No one sees her fight for control.  She looks at things in shades of red.  Blood drips slowly, from a cut on her forehead.  No one loves a broken doll; no one loves anyone who bleeds.  (this is what she tells herself.)   
She loves a boy who loves a girl.  She believes in beauty,  But she believes looks can kill.  So with a cold stare she looks at him.  Hoping that his hope will wither within.  There is never anything pretty about want.  (this is how she lives.)   
She walks in silence,  Just the moon and co a picture of a beautiful girl
in Open on 11/30/06
a potrate of a beautiful girlShe is a tortured soul.  No one sees her struggle.  No one sees her fight for control.  She looks at things in shades of red.  Blood drips slowly, from a cut on her forehead.  No one loves a broken doll; no one loves anyone who bleeds.  (this is what she tells herself.)   
She loves a boy who loves a girl.  She believes in beauty,  But she believes looks can kill.  So with a cold stare she looks at him.  Hoping that his hope will wither within.  There is never anything pretty about want.  (this is how she lives.)   
She walks in silence,  Just the moon and co a potrate of a beautiful girl
in Open on 11/30/06
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Journal Entry: Tue May 29, 2007, 5:40 PM
  • Mood: Artistic
  • Listening to: Elvis Costello
  • Reading: the selfish gene by Richard Dawkins
  • Watching: Marie Antoinette by Sofia Coppella
  • Drinking: anything with an alchole content
So I can't remember the last time i even felt like putting a poem up on deviantart. I don't know if I ever will again, but I have received two comments in the last...three weeks on some very old shit of mine...I mean stuff that I think kinda sucks. So now I feel like I need to get in there and delete in a serious way. I still write (for all two or three of you that care), if you go to myspace.com/nesouth you can read the new things. I still feel like I am progressing...and I still think that most of the people here have their heads shoved so far up their fucking asses that they wouldn't know creative writing if it gang-banged their mum's on Halloween while wearing a scream mask and calling them cheeky monkeys....but that’s just my humble opinion.

Toni if you read this, I miss you. Drop me a note here or email me (natedog96@juno.com). Please.

Also, if anyone knows how to get ahold of Danny, let me know. If you need to ask me what Danny...then don't fucking waste my time.

peace and love,

Nathaniel E. South

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  • Current Age: twenty-seven
  • Current Residence: Elkhart, Indiana
  • Favourite artist: monet, vangoh, dali
  • Favourite poet or writer: edger alen poe, emily dickinson,mark twain, steven king

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*airnsun:iconairnsun: Dec 14, 2007, 9:55:20 AM
thanks for watchin' daddy ;)

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!areincarnation:iconareincarnation: Apr 5, 2007, 4:14:43 PM
*poke*

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many cry for the dolphin, trapped in fishing nets.

but who cries for the tuna?
~madamfriesen:iconmadamfriesen: Mar 9, 2007, 3:42:21 PM
thanks for the watch :)

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for you.
!areincarnation:iconareincarnation: Jan 20, 2007, 9:21:14 AM
i know, i know... i'm useless!

i only really come on nowadays to drop the odd note to tricia. But there are a lot of fucked up people and selfish people on this site man, so i don't tend to socialise much... if you ahve msn i could always drop you that.

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many cry for the dolphin, trapped in fishing nets.

but who cries for the tuna?
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~xXdr0psXx:iconxXdr0psXx: Nov 27, 2006, 2:29:29 PM
i looked at your music site,
if you ever come out with a record
[which i'm sure you will..!]
please let me know
you're an excelent writer with an awesome band

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hold on to me darling, I've got nowhere else to go...
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`PoeticWar:iconPoeticWar: Sep 19, 2006, 7:15:24 PM
Awesome. I've been following your music via myspace when I've been able. :)

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`PoeticWar:iconPoeticWar: Sep 17, 2006, 8:25:09 PM
Heya Nat.

Not against poetry, though maybe with. ;)

All's pretty well. How're you doing?

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!areincarnation:iconareincarnation: Feb 1, 2006, 9:32:18 AM
thanking you, sir....

(i've not forgotten you, natty.... i will get round to commenting on some of your pieces)

danny

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many cry for the dolphin, trapped in fishing nets.

but who cries for the tuna?
~linedinblack:iconlinedinblack: Jan 31, 2006, 8:33:37 PM
hey nate..hope you get this soon....would myspace you but it seems to be down at the moment.... anyways... im going to try and get my ink this weekend and wanted you to be there for it. im going in to the shop to talk to jason and get the design finished... but i wanted you to know about it just the same.... i'll let you know for sure what day.... but if you could make it that would be great!



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~natdaddy:iconnatdaddy: Dec 23, 2005, 10:57:26 AM
so true. it is inner truth, and morality that shapes the bar of idealism that we should strive for. if we don't we just drown in moral relitivisum.

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break before you bend.
*MSJames:iconMSJames: Dec 23, 2005, 9:20:02 AM
Idealism is just that, an imagined ideal situation. Truth has nothing to do with it unless, like natdaddy said, you use it to alter your own ideals. ;)

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~natdaddy:iconnatdaddy: Oct 11, 2005, 11:16:04 AM
not at all. i feel that the truth that i have found and seen has shaped my idealism. dose that make sense?

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break before you bend.
`knock:iconknock: Oct 11, 2005, 7:08:56 AM
How much do you believe in idealism? Would you say that our personal ideas are the only source of truth?
~natdaddy:iconnatdaddy: Oct 11, 2005, 5:40:58 AM
i think you would have to get me to belive tha idealism is false. by nature, idealism is ideal. it is what we should be striving for. if anything i feel that man has polluted the mind of poetry with false relitivisum.

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break before you bend.
`knock:iconknock: Oct 11, 2005, 5:03:46 AM
Is it possible that poetry has corrupted the progress of man by polluting the mind with false idealism?
~natdaddy:iconnatdaddy: Sep 10, 2005, 11:15:34 PM
its a good name. don't let anyone tell you other wise.

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break before you bend.
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